Process Work 10/29

After my peer review I realize that I need to rework the format of the first part of my script where it reads less academically and more like a podcast. I am still struggling with reworking the assignment to be a different project then just a new way of reading it. My hope is that by breaking down some of the statistics and facts into more of a storytelling format that the sound of the podcast will be engaging and not just fact listing. However, my introduction does set the podcast off to being interesting I just need to be sure the rest of the paper works the same.